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Living in a city has more advantages than living in the country (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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In our modern world many people think that living in a megapolis has many advantages. However, there are others, who are convinced, that it is not like this at all.

In my opinion living in the city is wonderful, and has advantages. Firstly, when you livevin the megapolis you have more chances to get a good education and well-paid job. If you live in a countryside your odds are close to zero. Secondly, in the city you have more places where you can spend your time. You do not need to get to your destination for several hours.

However, there are others, who are convinced that life in the countryside is much better. They say, the main advantage is clean air. It is not polluted by cars and factories.

I can agree with the above point of you.

Of course, the air can be clean, but in the city you have much more opportunities to develop yourself and your job. Moreover, you can do business in the city and sometimes rest in the country.

In conclusion, I would like to say, that everybosy choose where to live himself. But if you want to develop yourself abd get a well-paid job, and make a great investment in your future you should live in the city.

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