Most people believe that it is important to look nice. However, some people say that we place too much importance on appearance (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

Nowadays there are a lot of people consider that your appearance, including your face, body, and clothes, should always look pretty. But other people think that surface is not so important. (вступление + 2 мнения)

In my opinion, people should not put much attention on their looks. First of all, it may lead to unhealthy diets. A lot of young girls try to lose weight starving so it is definitely not good for their bodies. Also people may be too concerned about their surface so there is no place for other things like hobbies because it takes all of their free time.

Moreover, many people choose plastic surgery as the way to becoming beautiful denying the risks like body’s rejection of an implant, allergy or just an ugly result. (мое мнение + 2 аргумента)

However, some people can disagree with me. They think that people, who have a beautiful appearance, can get more benefits from life. For example, matching the standards of beauty can help you to become famous. Furthermore, people tend to believe that without attractive appearance you could not find a person who will love you because no one could ever like an unpleasant person. (противоположное мнение)

I cannot agree with that point of view. Successful life depends on your character and personal qualities like creativity, intelligence, purposefulness and etc. Also your appearance does not play a role when it comes to love because we do not pay attention on appearance if we do not like the person’s character. (контраргумент к противоположному мнению)

In conclusion, there are different points of view. I believe that people should not become obsessed with their appearance because inner beauty is more important. (вывод)