40.2 Only people who earn a lot of money are successful (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

Some people believe that only rich individuals can be prosperous. Others suppose that money is not important for success. Now I want to express my point of view on this issue.

I think that every person can be successful even without big salaries. Firstly, for many people health is a key to success. They lead a healthy lifestyle, do not get sick and thanks to it they are happy and prosperous. Secondly, people who have a united and friendly family are successful. They always have the support of their family members and they are never alone. With the help of their family they become self-confident and ready for new successes.

Nevertheless, there are people who are sure that only rich people are felicitous.

First of all, when a person has a lot of money, he or she has many opportunities. Opportunities in the educational and working spheres, in the social sphere are available for them. These possibilities help them to develop, achieve all goals and be successful.

In spite of this convincing argument, I disagree with them. Earning money can be difficult and exhausting. People can have much money, but they do not know how to use it to their advantage. In this way, big salaries and the wrong path can make them unsuccessful.

In conclusion, I would like to say that there are two opinions on this issue. Some people suppose that only people with much money are felicitous, but I strongly believe that every person can achieve success even without money.